Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Theme Thursday: Green





Chasing butterflies
Till the end of the rainbows
And I don't know where I stand
Or when I'll be gone

My dream is in my hands
But I dream it anyway

Waking in the dawn
Watching the stars as they fade
All what's left is a memory
And I elude

My dream is in my hands
But I dream it anyway

Colors explode 
And all I see is black
Have I gone blind?
Usher me to the light

My dream is in my hands 
But I dream it anyway

Cross the world in your sleep
Let your soul meet mine
I'm done with being strong
Let me cry in your arms

My dream is in my hands 
But I dream it anyway

Desert extends
The sun is burning me
Pursuing a mirage
Of a green land
Far far away
It may not be true
But I'm going anyway



17 comments:

  1. "Pursuing a mirage
    Of a green land
    Far far away
    It may not be true
    But I'm going anyway"

    oooo :) yes!
    better to chase a possibility
    than to be stagnant !
    oooo :)

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  2. I love the line.
    "Cross the world in your sleep
    Let your soul meet mine."
    Truly beautiful.

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  3. I love this... the beginning is brilliant!!!

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  4. "I'm done with being strong"
    the pain, the helplessness, the longing, the hope.. Fabulously weaved! It says it all, friend.. Go on!

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  5. wonderful piece...being lost in a dream and letting it take you...nice. i also agree...

    Cross the world in your sleep
    Let your soul meet mine
    I'm done with being strong
    Let me cry in your arms

    is a phenomenal verse. so speaks to me...

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  6. great piece Maha. and I love the picture

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  7. Maha, you've given us so much to think about here! Simply brilliant!

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  8. Cha bhi fios aire math an tobair gus an tràigh e.

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  9. "Watching the stars as they fade"...'tis nice,this... :)

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  10. This is lovely Maha, I especially liked the lines "Cross the world in your sleep
    Let your soul meet mine' ... so beautiful and so many possibilities. xo ♡

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  11. So lyrical...this piece is begging for music!

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  12. I liked the whole thing. You're very talented.

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  13. That was so beautiful. So far, this was my absolute favorite. You truly are an amazing writer.

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  14. Lovely @ MAHA...written ..giving the glimpse of everything just occurring in synchronous.. . Gr8

    All the best ..wish to read a lots of poems form your end ..

    Thanks ..

    P.S: Do visit back if you got time ..I know you

    will be busy .....So go green n interact with nature .. he he Don't get confused ..its my new Theme

    made by me

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  15. here you write as you always have...with your heart....and this gift of emotion that you give me is making me so silent, listening to it over and over.
    Like a song.
    The reeds of the Nile are swaying beneath the date palms, while the wooden boats swaddle through...the pyramids smile in the evening skies.
    Thankyou Maha!
    this post is really beautiful!
    COL

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  16. "My dream is in my hands, but I dream it anyway". Brilliant! Dream we must, see futures brighter than what hands hold. Tomorrow our fingers may splay wide, grow length, grasp more. Thanks for stopping by my blog. Add your two cents. I look forward to getting to know you.

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