Wednesday, April 28, 2010

55-Hallucinations

Strings of images intertwine. Before I can touch them, they fade into the blankness leaving me amidst plays of black and white. I clutch my lungs to narrow the holes and let oxygen in. Tears crystallize on the ground. Between the air and the air again, I let go of my eyes to see you.

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28 comments:

  1. Nice maha. Good 55. check out my magpie tale

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  2. realy fascinating..between the air...quite the mystical iece you have woven....nice 55.

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  3. Right after the first line, I thought, "Blurring together until they became one, mixed up scene, replaying over and over, driving me insane...."

    But I liked your version so much better. Beautiful Maha.

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  4. This is a beautiful 55, Maha. You do such surreal things with words..."I let go of my eyes to see you."

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  5. I love your writing style, I loose myself in your words. This was marvellous, Maha.

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  6. So visually rich and beautiful. Awesome! x

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  7. beautiful 55! i catch myself wondering who you are...a cross between shakespeare, an english lit major, and a damsel in distress! no matter, i'll be back to take another look, to be mesmerized by your skillful words...

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  8. Just AMAZING... I love your writing... I think I've told you afew many times... But it is just that I do really love it!

    Hugs
    Dulce

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  9. a little piece of mystery that's full of intrique.

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  10. "Between the air and the air..."

    There is so very much space, there.
    Well done, Maha. This is good!

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  11. wow. and your 14? unbelievable skill for one as young as yourself. very, very nice.

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  12. The imagery and flow are hypnotic. Thanks

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  13. Maha...
    What a prodigy..What a Treasure you are.
    Beautiful 55 My Friend.
    Thank you for sharing your gift with us all.
    Thanks also for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  14. Letting go of your eyes to see the person - there is so much to see that our eyes cannot see. For we need to see not a person's outwards appearance but what is inside them.

    My 55 is Perceptions Colored

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  15. Very imaginary and wonderful 55!
    Excellent.
    Mine is here
    I have three 55 to offer.
    Hope you like them.
    Have you a blessed weekend!
    hugs
    shakira

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  16. I love sharing hallucinations with you... Surreal. You are amazing.
    Hugs/ Jo.

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  17. Wow....this is amazing!!! VERY impressive Maha.

    Mine this week is DOUBLE STANDARD As always, scroll down a bit, below my Friday's Show n Tell.

    Have a super weekend fellow 55'r!!

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  18. It amazes me that such a young woman can write so beautifully. It as though your soul has lived lifetimes. Wonderful 55, deah Maha.

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  19. I love the visual of the tears crystalizing on the ground. Thanks for coming by to visit my 55 as well.

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  20. That's scary (or, is it just me?)! Well done!

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  21. Lovely. I really love that last line.

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  22. I like this a lot! It makes me think of awakening from a nightmare.

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  23. FANTASTIC! I'd never of hallucinations quite this way before. Such an interesting and imaginative description.

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  24. Nice 55 Maha- like the images that are
    whirling around in space

    mine is up at
    moondustwriter.com

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  25. This is stunning, you have a very powerful way with words.

    Thank you so much for your comments on my 55 as well.
    -C

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  26. Beautifully written again.

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