Thursday, June 24, 2010

55-Girl with Burnt Eyes

I plunged my hands deep into the texture of a scarred face. Recurrent echoes kept on floating back within the narrow walls of the room before fading into the grey lines on the frontiers of smoldered fancies. The image had a hole. “Do I get to be the same?” pouted girl with burnt eyes.


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17 comments:

  1. So much in so few words, Maha...as always, your writing is electric and deeply poignant. This was a wonderful 55 :)

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  2. Ohh! I see you are in this 55 words post stuff! Nice!

    And well... as very few people you can drive me to a new landscape, a new melody you make me hear... a new instant you create in such few words!

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  3. Maha....
    Quite a creative and talented mind you have...
    Fabulous 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for returning to the Friday Funfest, you were missed.
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  4. Creatively written in only 55 words. Wonderful!

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  5. Creative and leave the imagination to go wild.

    mine is here

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  6. MAHA, each time I read something out of your creative factory, I sit in awe. Minutes later I find my mouth is still open in disbelief of such a talent as you possess being right here online--for FREE! (I'm not kidding!)

    For my "55" GO HERE

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  7. oh wow, so well written this is!

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  8. I agree with Sam. This was a beautiful 55. Lovely writing as always!

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  9. Crying ashen tears over this one. Great 55. My 55 is HERE .

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  10. Maha You amaze me all the time in a way so hard to me describe
    this is just amazing. You must be amazing...
    sigh

    D.

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  11. that's haunting!
    I admire your mastery of words.

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  12. Have you considered writing a full story, Maha. One where solid and imaginative descriptions are pervasive?

    How beautiful and authentic :).

    If you managed to pick up a profound story and use this magnificant way of writing in it, the result will surely be dazzling.

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