Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Impressions

And then dreams
Long and persistent
Take me off to you beloved you
Not unlike when all in me turns cold
I should find life vigorous and strong
Ringing the bells
Of my soul’s dingy door
Asking permission
To let me be again


And in the day the sun comes shining
So tender in me you melt
Leaving only
An impression of warmth

11 comments:

  1. Wheeeuuuuuoooo! (Whistle!)
    Maha, you achieve Grade AAA+for revealing the artist (you), also AAA+ for concealing the artist (you).

    Amazing grasp of life, philosophy and communication of those.

    Where is your book? I could read your words and re-read them for years to come--and I will!

    Many thanks!

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  2. hey there maha...beautifully crafted piece...first i felt warmth and hope and then...

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  3. extremely good.It might just be me but is felt musical

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  4. Beautiful and haunting. Great!

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  5. thanks for sharing yourself



    Warm Aloha from Honolulu

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  6. So very beautiful dear Maha, your poems are amazing!

    xoxoxo ♡

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  7. Just lovely, Maha. I'm sorry I haven't been here sooner.

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  8. Beautiful...
    Your poem embraces so many feelings and thoughts...
    You have a gift...

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