Sunday, April 11, 2010

Farewell Fornever



How I wish to recoil back to my dark solitude and let my eyes bleed for eternity. But alas! I am out of blood. And never again shall I wish for loneliness; it's embedded in my core.And what is it to be seen beyond the clouds but your face?


You never left me; a hidden fourth dimension to my existence.


Imperceptible


They never feel


Will never feel


The immortal symphony of love


Breaching the sky


Out of sight is never out of mind



Farewell fornever my dear



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14 comments:

  1. BernieApril 11, 2010 at 11:06 PM

    This sounds way too final.....
    I have learned to never say never,
    ..........:-) Hugs

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  2. Brian MillerApril 12, 2010 at 3:13 AM

    see you sosoon! out of sight is not out of mind...and even if if it was there is still the heart to consider.

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  3. MagpieApril 12, 2010 at 6:09 AM

    Oh, this is very sad...hold memories in your heart.

    I responded to your kind comment on my blog. Thank you for all your caring and thoughtful suggestions. They are much appreciated. :)

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  4. Craftsman of lightApril 12, 2010 at 7:37 AM

    Sadness colours your words in almost all of your writings...it s has this beautiful glow...and a flowering takes place.

    Is it because there is a gap between the depth of your feelings and you age. In one you are outgrowing so rapidly the other...

    And whatever it is your posts are gifts to me!
    Bravo Maha!

    Col

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  5. TracyApril 12, 2010 at 8:18 AM

    At first I thought you made a type. Very clever!

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  6. DulceApril 12, 2010 at 1:47 PM

    Oh my!
    Girl-woman you write from the very core and heart.... THIS Is just AWESOME

    Oh how I've Loved to read it-once and again!

    Dulce

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  7. Oddyoddyo13April 12, 2010 at 4:56 PM

    That's so sad Maha-it made my heart ache. Beautiful.

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  8. THE BEATYApril 12, 2010 at 5:31 PM

    wow sad. And to make sad things (slightly) humorous I'm guessing this didin't come from personal experience

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  9. THE BEATYApril 12, 2010 at 6:21 PM

    Just did your question post sorry it took so long

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  10. LarryGApril 12, 2010 at 7:52 PM

    the sky must be breached -
    love these allusions!

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  11. Peter StoneApril 13, 2010 at 12:19 AM

    Your words carry the depth of the heartache associated with lost love, though I like the expression 'farewell fornever.'

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  12. Mama ZenApril 13, 2010 at 10:06 AM

    Absolutely lovely!

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  13. THE BEATYApril 13, 2010 at 7:54 PM

    sorry misinterpreted the meaning. Makes my comment seem lowbrow and I appologize for that

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  14. The Cello StringsApril 16, 2010 at 7:19 AM

    http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/04/16/you-are-perfect-poet-at-week-14-award-announcement/

    JP nominated you the perfect poet award at Rally Thursday,
    to accept,
    please post a poem,
    nominate one poet from Rally,
    display the logo.

    upon acceptance, you shall attend the Rally once,
    simply visit and comment for 12 participants in my list, let me know after you are done...

    Happy Friday!

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