Strings of images intertwine. Before I can touch them, they fade into the blankness leaving me amidst plays of black and white. I clutch my lungs to narrow the holes and let oxygen in. Tears crystallize on the ground. Between the air and the air again, I let go of my eyes to see you.
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Nice maha. Good 55. check out my magpie tale
ReplyDeleterealy fascinating..between the air...quite the mystical iece you have woven....nice 55.
ReplyDeleteRight after the first line, I thought, "Blurring together until they became one, mixed up scene, replaying over and over, driving me insane...."
ReplyDeleteBut I liked your version so much better. Beautiful Maha.
This is a beautiful 55, Maha. You do such surreal things with words..."I let go of my eyes to see you."
ReplyDeleteI love your writing style, I loose myself in your words. This was marvellous, Maha.
ReplyDeleteSo visually rich and beautiful. Awesome! x
ReplyDeleteNice.
ReplyDeletebeautiful 55! i catch myself wondering who you are...a cross between shakespeare, an english lit major, and a damsel in distress! no matter, i'll be back to take another look, to be mesmerized by your skillful words...
ReplyDeleteJust AMAZING... I love your writing... I think I've told you afew many times... But it is just that I do really love it!
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Dulce
a little piece of mystery that's full of intrique.
ReplyDelete"Between the air and the air..."
ReplyDeleteThere is so very much space, there.
Well done, Maha. This is good!
wow. and your 14? unbelievable skill for one as young as yourself. very, very nice.
ReplyDeleteThe imagery and flow are hypnotic. Thanks
ReplyDeleteMaha...
ReplyDeleteWhat a prodigy..What a Treasure you are.
Beautiful 55 My Friend.
Thank you for sharing your gift with us all.
Thanks also for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Letting go of your eyes to see the person - there is so much to see that our eyes cannot see. For we need to see not a person's outwards appearance but what is inside them.
ReplyDeleteMy 55 is Perceptions Colored
Very imaginary and wonderful 55!
ReplyDeleteExcellent.
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Have you a blessed weekend!
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shakira
I love sharing hallucinations with you... Surreal. You are amazing.
ReplyDeleteHugs/ Jo.
Wow....this is amazing!!! VERY impressive Maha.
ReplyDeleteMine this week is DOUBLE STANDARD As always, scroll down a bit, below my Friday's Show n Tell.
Have a super weekend fellow 55'r!!
It amazes me that such a young woman can write so beautifully. It as though your soul has lived lifetimes. Wonderful 55, deah Maha.
ReplyDeleteI love the visual of the tears crystalizing on the ground. Thanks for coming by to visit my 55 as well.
ReplyDeleteThat's scary (or, is it just me?)! Well done!
ReplyDeleteSo much longing. Great 55.
ReplyDeleteLovely. I really love that last line.
ReplyDeleteI like this a lot! It makes me think of awakening from a nightmare.
ReplyDeleteFANTASTIC! I'd never of hallucinations quite this way before. Such an interesting and imaginative description.
ReplyDeleteNice 55 Maha- like the images that are
ReplyDeletewhirling around in space
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This is stunning, you have a very powerful way with words.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your comments on my 55 as well.
-C
Beautifully written again.
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