Thursday, August 12, 2010

55-Reruns


Tick Tock
My present is passing
As I stand here alone
Watching from a distance
Reruns of the past
Tears
Break my shields
And you slip through the holes
Making me sink in you
Drowning my soul
The scars are fading
Only me and you remain
The pains are  aching
Only me and you remain.
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  1. Brian MillerAugust 12, 2010 at 7:11 PM

    nice to see you on the 55s this e week maha...

    the scars are fading, but the pain is still there...between them...hmm...nice 55.

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  2. margaret.August 12, 2010 at 7:15 PM

    55's are an excellent idea.

    this is wonderful.

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  3. Jannie FunsterAugust 12, 2010 at 7:25 PM

    Yes, many great lines here.

    I like the idea of the holes, holes in shields -- armor in love never seems the right outfit.

    Nicely done!

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  4. G-ManAugust 12, 2010 at 10:39 PM

    Maha...
    Outstanding My Friend
    This was intensly passionate.
    Excellent 55...
    Thanks for returning to the Funfest, and have a Kick Ass Week-End.

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  5. Susan DeborahAugust 12, 2010 at 11:21 PM

    55, you too. Challenges in words are definitely seductive and inviting for a keen writer.

    The past and the present always alternate in our life making it distant :)

    Joy always,
    Susan

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  6. ClaudiaAugust 13, 2010 at 3:22 AM

    very passionate writing Maha - and always good when the scars are fading...

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  7. AustinAugust 13, 2010 at 3:52 AM

    This was really good. I like the idea of melting through the holes into, that was really nice!

    Mine is up here

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  8. MagpieAugust 13, 2010 at 7:56 AM

    What huge amounts of emotion you pull out of me in just 55 words.
    Beautiful, Maha.

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  9. Sam LiuAugust 13, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    Dark and haunting, Maha. This piece has a poignant beauty and sensual mystery.

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  10. DulceAugust 13, 2010 at 10:53 AM

    such love, stuck in the past... how sweetly yo express such a feeling... that loneliness, co dependence,, staring from the passing present...

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  11. in_blue_skyAugust 13, 2010 at 11:08 AM

    itna blogs kyon hai?
    But ur poems amazing.
    Thank u

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  12. Lu AnnAugust 13, 2010 at 11:34 AM

    I like your 55 posts! sorry not much to say today Ive been kinda distracted but i TRULY LIKE IT:)

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  13. Oddyoddyo13August 13, 2010 at 3:47 PM

    I love the title-"Reruns".

    I can relate. :)

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  14. KBAugust 13, 2010 at 5:05 PM

    Those reruns can really do your head in.

    Mine’s here.

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  15. moondustwriterAugust 13, 2010 at 8:14 PM

    nice 55 - what remains in the end...

    thanks for your kind comments on One Shot this week

    smiles from the moon

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  16. Mama ZenAugust 14, 2010 at 10:51 AM

    Oh, don't watch from a distance!

    Beautiful writing.

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  17. moondustwriterAugust 15, 2010 at 7:50 PM

    This one pulls at my heart. I want to know more and see the end result be a success.

    Nice 55

    smiles from the Moon

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