tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post7078220028093463159..comments2023-10-15T06:34:16.731-07:00Comments on Melodies: SafeyyaMahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00836281820315404682noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-76710102101936895982010-08-25T16:52:36.062-07:002010-08-25T16:52:36.062-07:00Gorgeous. The description, the accuracy....beautif...Gorgeous. The description, the accuracy....beautiful.Oddyoddyo13http://www.blogger.com/profile/05557994037779209704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-35340529800693046642010-08-25T17:10:57.715-07:002010-08-25T17:10:57.715-07:00intriguing tale and displays an interesting realit...intriguing tale and displays an interesting reality...what do you marry for...hmmm...<br><br><br>fyi spelling....abassa buy you for valentines...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-28217633723081818032010-08-25T17:16:16.891-07:002010-08-25T17:16:16.891-07:00thanks Brian! I was typing rather fast and I remem...thanks Brian! I was typing rather fast and I remember correcting it before but it appears like it was not saved.Mahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09044365084432889661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-51292534257198997672010-08-25T17:57:17.826-07:002010-08-25T17:57:17.826-07:00ah a discription of the mind numbing details of da...ah a discription of the mind numbing details of daily life... so funTHE BEATYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06707403512875881799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-65720079314574066952010-08-25T18:09:43.905-07:002010-08-25T18:09:43.905-07:00i love the detail to which you describe things.if ...i love the detail to which you describe things.<br>if i close my eyes i can see everything, just as it is.<br><br>wonderful.<br>xomargaret.http://www.blogger.com/profile/03651543686862897645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-55866944134753701542010-08-25T21:39:19.963-07:002010-08-25T21:39:19.963-07:00This story is amazing. It flows so naturally. Noth...This story is amazing. It flows so naturally. Nothing is forced. You have wonderful talent and I hope you pursue it further.Evahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13259529350631356452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-21085097637690463672010-08-26T08:20:57.393-07:002010-08-26T08:20:57.393-07:00Such a descriptive peek into another world...where...Such a descriptive peek into another world...where we can see we're very much alike in so many ways.Magpiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01132555347136919591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-80628049406320363482010-08-26T09:31:23.185-07:002010-08-26T09:31:23.185-07:00An ordinary girl, another ordinary day, but a stor...An ordinary girl, another ordinary day, but a story told in an intriguing manner, nice!<br><br>Cheers<br>Blasphemous AestheteBlasphemous Aesthetehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16417596461540852006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-42193252833335656922010-08-26T11:40:16.836-07:002010-08-26T11:40:16.836-07:00Fantastic writing! I'm glad you stopped by and...Fantastic writing! I'm glad you stopped by and said hi so I could return the favor - and I'm so grateful I did! Is this one part of a story that you will continue or this just a writing exercise that is complete? I get so hooked on good writing and story-telling!Phoenixhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07477498671080132176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-47114808409456218202010-08-26T13:06:51.605-07:002010-08-26T13:06:51.605-07:00hm - glad she doesn't want to marry some ugly ...hm - glad she doesn't want to marry some ugly man just because he's rich - but also difficult when you barely have enough money to earn a living<br>think that's a sad reality for more women than we would imagine<br>glad you wrote about it MahaClaudiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-71348028764614060252010-08-26T13:16:17.238-07:002010-08-26T13:16:17.238-07:00so she wants excitement and money, and who can bla...so she wants excitement and money, and who can blame her? it's so fun to drop in on a different world, where concerns and aspirations may not be all that much different than the debutants in the suburbs. these questions of who to spend our life with are nicely compartmentalized within the realities of riding crowded buses and working huge days at un-fun jobs. great detail of her clothes tight on her body.<br>what is worth living for?Ed Pilollahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09139531369534586168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-5226741174391495822010-08-27T04:29:32.048-07:002010-08-27T04:29:32.048-07:00Yeap... money cannot buy love.Two opposites, these...Yeap... money cannot buy love.<br>Two opposites, these girls, one of them has never met LOVE...<br><br>Intriguing story..Dulcehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-87097417200452395892010-08-27T21:05:58.509-07:002010-08-27T21:05:58.509-07:00I spent half my life waiting for a cute woman with...I spent half my life waiting for a cute woman with money. I found one but she was waiting for the same thing... a rich woman with money! That was enlightening as well as entertaining~Stafford Rayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03048757515249725540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-70062297095845955092010-08-28T11:23:48.489-07:002010-08-28T11:23:48.489-07:00@Pheonix: I got something n my head for it and I d...@Pheonix: I got something n my head for it and I don't know if I'll carry it out or just leave it as something in my headMahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09044365084432889661noreply@blogger.com