tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post4983015812205957512..comments2023-10-15T06:34:16.731-07:00Comments on Melodies: Dancing on Spider Webs ـــ PoemMahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00836281820315404682noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-58158532091303698372010-08-01T19:11:42.480-07:002010-08-01T19:11:42.480-07:00extremely well done poem. the anology to spider we...extremely well done poem. the anology to spider webs in brilliant,THE BEATYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06707403512875881799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-87115262553961838682010-08-01T20:40:24.700-07:002010-08-01T20:40:24.700-07:00wicked flow of emotion today maha...i wonder what ...wicked flow of emotion today maha...i wonder what the slap was...but it is good to let the birds out of the cages every once in a while...smiles.Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-43608225753453054612010-08-01T20:59:06.954-07:002010-08-01T20:59:06.954-07:00Life can feel like walking on spiderwebs. I could...Life can feel like walking on spiderwebs. I could relate to the underlying message of this poem. It was wonderfulEvahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13259529350631356452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-28158601980472870422010-08-01T21:17:26.174-07:002010-08-01T21:17:26.174-07:00Susch an emotional waterfall of words Maha...a won...Susch an emotional waterfall of words Maha...a wonderful poem, yet again!Katherinehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05667997972741557676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-54862825216922528662010-08-01T21:58:10.344-07:002010-08-01T21:58:10.344-07:00If one slap gave such lovely verse, I wonder what ...If one slap gave such lovely verse, I wonder what if there were some more.<br><br>Joy always,<br>SusanSusan Deborahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08885957854901839400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-15143266167607570912010-08-01T22:42:54.200-07:002010-08-01T22:42:54.200-07:00Loved how this seemed to speak of dreams, and how ...Loved how this seemed to speak of dreams, and how fragile they are, especially when you wake up...<br><br>Don't know how I came up with that, but you know, just go with the flow. LoLOddyoddyo13http://www.blogger.com/profile/05557994037779209704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-64397331708506180282010-08-02T02:20:28.993-07:002010-08-02T02:20:28.993-07:00Magnifique!Loved the flow of dense yet light words...Magnifique!<br>Loved the flow of dense yet light words ass they go to such a poignant ending...Dulcehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-63218082782410961282010-08-02T05:11:02.000-07:002010-08-02T05:11:02.000-07:00everything you write, amazes me.everything you write, amazes me.margaret.http://www.blogger.com/profile/03651543686862897645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-35325759603093527632010-08-02T05:47:25.512-07:002010-08-02T05:47:25.512-07:00Actually Dani, that's exactly what i meant to ...Actually Dani, that's exactly what i meant to say.Mahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09044365084432889661noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-58643871064598234712010-08-02T07:34:04.523-07:002010-08-02T07:34:04.523-07:00Another brilliant piece! Our minds with their abil...Another brilliant piece! Our minds with their ability to imagine and compartmentalize are certainly our most powerful and innovative tools - and you use yours so masterfully!Felicitashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02365380167385885738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-41926181753850409532010-08-02T10:44:07.650-07:002010-08-02T10:44:07.650-07:00So true. Life can be so fragile sometimes. You hav...So true. Life can be so fragile sometimes. You have such a unique way of getting your points across. I love it when I see that you have posted something new when I sign in to check my dashboard. (:RJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06495095899975357654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-19564808476473382722010-08-02T11:05:23.225-07:002010-08-02T11:05:23.225-07:00oh my... what is she running from? and can she ge...oh my... what is she running from? and can she get far enough away?<br><br>the slap...<br><br>dead on breaking the web so carefully woven...<br><br>beautiful displayed emotions here.Kayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17353317664100788614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-42033743236873850172010-08-02T11:28:07.286-07:002010-08-02T11:28:07.286-07:00Be-ah-yoo-tee-fulI have been thinking a lot about ...Be-ah-yoo-tee-ful<br><br>I have been thinking a lot about the subconscious lately. People and concepts keep coming to me in dreams.Kaleidoscope Girlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-80477958945301600122010-08-02T21:30:40.379-07:002010-08-02T21:30:40.379-07:00The journey here is fleeting and I hope her wounds...The journey here is fleeting and I hope her wounds heal quickly. Beautifully written, Maha.Magpiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01132555347136919591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-80970398357756446472010-08-04T02:51:22.790-07:002010-08-04T02:51:22.790-07:00Excellent!Excellent!bardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15130589527012329455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-83021984688627003882010-08-04T15:29:11.602-07:002010-08-04T15:29:11.602-07:00Denial of the irrefutable past.Ruling and could no...Denial of the irrefutable past.<br><br>Ruling and could not be ruled.<br><br>World as fragile as spiders webs.<br><br>Ddid you know that spiders webs are very resistant? I like to think that us "women" are like spiders webs, a glimpse of the world, being so fragile and still so strong.<br><br>:) Nice, nice poem!Lu Annhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03401035411828743675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-82570210145784417452010-08-06T01:45:07.506-07:002010-08-06T01:45:07.506-07:00Beautiful!Beautiful!Tabitha Birdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08196816108272065974noreply@blogger.com