tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post1324048787841677707..comments2023-10-15T06:34:16.731-07:00Comments on Melodies: TimelessnessMahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00836281820315404682noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-641419437493375202010-07-08T16:35:53.742-07:002010-07-08T16:35:53.742-07:00well you have no worries about being a lousy paint...well you have no worries about being a lousy painter or writer....caught in a hurricane..i know that feeling...it seems there may be more here i am missing but...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-29159933129960115942010-07-08T17:55:46.776-07:002010-07-08T17:55:46.776-07:00How you feel when you're trapped...*shivers* N...How you feel when you're trapped...*shivers* Not good, I can tell you. <br><br>This was fabulous-so different than what you used to write.Oddyoddyo13http://www.blogger.com/profile/05557994037779209704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-31532109518347005072010-07-08T18:59:42.134-07:002010-07-08T18:59:42.134-07:00I can relate well to this feeling. If only it woul...I can relate well to this feeling. If only it would land on a moment you don't wish to end instead of what you describe here.RJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06495095899975357654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-29161250225027475002010-07-08T19:25:30.405-07:002010-07-08T19:25:30.405-07:00best wishes.powerful message.best wishes.<br>powerful message.The Cello Stringshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-27334434371914644982010-07-08T19:47:15.408-07:002010-07-08T19:47:15.408-07:00Excellent! Maha, What you might be saying here, yo...Excellent! Maha, What you might be saying here, you say so well--grin! I have long thought there is no such quality of the universe called "time". But, the proof? Poof!<br><br>Trapped, yessss, many places, but mainly in my own mind, that steel trap--won't let anything in, nor anything OUT! And the rats ARE real--grin again!<br><br>Is it a thought? "...you (who) are naught"<br><br>You are anything and everything EXCEPT "lousy painter" or "bad writer", Maha--and you should humbly KNOW that!<br><br>And the ending--OH! Greatness!<br><br>(I do not like the adjective "bad" in front of "writer'..something else fits there: "...lousy painter<br>horrible writer."???)<br><br>Sorry I'm preaching what I never practice--you've heard of guys like that!<br><br>Awesome piece, like I'd expect from you, Ma'am.....If I am too rude for you, please correct me in Email, OK?--grin!steveronihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17498524940140288735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-84370321716618270922010-07-08T20:31:05.204-07:002010-07-08T20:31:05.204-07:00Is that a paean of the innermost crevices. I hope ...Is that a paean of the innermost crevices. I hope it is not but just a poetic meandering of the soul.<br>But don't they say what comes out is from within. The feeling almost makes one unable to move: mentally and spiritually. I know it too well. But even that shall pass.<br><br>Joy always,<br>SusanSusan Deborahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08885957854901839400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-78400172232844534792010-07-08T21:57:42.773-07:002010-07-08T21:57:42.773-07:00I, like Brian, feel I'm missing a bigger messa...I, like Brian, feel I'm missing a bigger message here. Lots being said. I'll read and read it again.Magpiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01132555347136919591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-12533467897457267762010-07-08T23:02:33.223-07:002010-07-08T23:02:33.223-07:00You are a great writer. I lked the first 3 paragra...You are a great writer. I lked the first 3 paragraphs very much. I can relate to them. The last para is also very good.<br><br>keep writing. :)<br>myriad-sumit.blogspot.comSumit Sarkarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-13365823548548506872010-07-09T04:02:41.796-07:002010-07-09T04:02:41.796-07:00This was a great piece of writing. Enjoyed it as a...This was a great piece of writing. Enjoyed it as always. I agree with Brian.<br>Have a nice day, Maha...:)Mr. Stupidhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03260596689348157568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-23361917506128824362010-07-09T04:09:04.821-07:002010-07-09T04:09:04.821-07:00that's pretty intense stuff, but I love it.x)x...that's pretty intense stuff, but I love it.<br>x)<br><br>xx scarzzsabine carahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07056736503874939145noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-91985869434957119742010-07-09T18:42:51.570-07:002010-07-09T18:42:51.570-07:00Something I am sure of is... you are SOO NOT a bad...Something I am sure of is... you are SOO NOT a bad writer.<br><br>:) Loved itLu Annhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03401035411828743675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-68980320380165875242010-07-09T18:44:03.613-07:002010-07-09T18:44:03.613-07:00yep... ive been trapped in a huriacane too! and Iv...yep... ive been trapped in a huriacane too! and Ive suffocated because of letting the window shot.Lu Annhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03401035411828743675noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-65390364446811770132010-07-10T11:01:45.672-07:002010-07-10T11:01:45.672-07:00I was really missing you wrote in verse.Painful a...I was really missing you wrote in verse.<br><br>Painful and powerful, as always... I started to feel anxious and kind of suffocated .. few people can get that far as i read them. You do.<br>A bad writer? No way girl!Dulcehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14958592985938279356noreply@blogger.com