tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post1284707428756041409..comments2023-10-15T06:34:16.731-07:00Comments on Melodies: Three LegsMahahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00836281820315404682noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-60550582730507791612010-04-24T18:04:35.924-07:002010-04-24T18:04:35.924-07:00Oh this is so beautiful...two souls plagued with m...Oh this is so beautiful...two souls plagued with misery and insanity join together, crying softly...such powerful images. And the dialogue is electric, I loved reading every word of this.Sam Liuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01014838954712295981noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-56923630999567671882010-04-24T18:18:36.901-07:002010-04-24T18:18:36.901-07:00Great writing Maha dear, you really have a gift. ...Great writing Maha dear, you really have a gift. xoxo ♡diannehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06171808338793139579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-45311661314271722302010-04-24T18:49:09.048-07:002010-04-24T18:49:09.048-07:00Funny where we find comfort.Funny where we find comfort.Oddyoddyo13http://www.blogger.com/profile/05557994037779209704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-36879415722244032422010-04-24T19:27:33.786-07:002010-04-24T19:27:33.786-07:00wonderfully done maha...glad they realise they are...wonderfully done maha...glad they realise they are not good for one another but in that moment of need they can be there for each other...Brian Millerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-63664015278388578222010-04-24T20:41:18.229-07:002010-04-24T20:41:18.229-07:00Star-crossed lovers....Star-crossed lovers....Magpiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01132555347136919591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-11285818979996845422010-04-25T06:12:06.460-07:002010-04-25T06:12:06.460-07:00The illustrous Charles Darwin beseiged by a stroke...The illustrous Charles Darwin beseiged by a stroke is very sad. The relationship with his old love is simultaneously sad and joyous. The fact they found each other at this late stage of life, to reminisce in the park for this brief moment in time gives some heat to the cold comfort of their once heated romance. I particularly love the way the story is scientifically describing Darwin; <br>"Images flitted before his eyes, then they would be transmitted to his head where they fused with its darkness producing grey memories that faded the moment they were born."<br><br>An amazingly creative and well-written master piece! Bravo and bravuras all around!chiccorealhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16902834462795623856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-68463960463148396142010-04-25T06:53:37.709-07:002010-04-25T06:53:37.709-07:00even after turning away, your vivid imagery still ...even after turning away, your vivid imagery still burns me...this was peircing, maha, thank you.sherihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16360494347587103696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-31262170089755781582010-04-25T07:40:30.593-07:002010-04-25T07:40:30.593-07:00great mapie tale can't wait to do mine its suc...great mapie tale can't wait to do mine its such a great prompt. Alaso I'm so mad Muse was playing in my city but was sold out when I tried to get ticketsTHE BEATYhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06707403512875881799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-18626579950165588182010-04-25T10:23:14.719-07:002010-04-25T10:23:14.719-07:00You are so good at presenting a "slice of lif...You are so good at presenting a "slice of life" in a way that really captures the true essence of your characters. Very well done, Maha.Felicitashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02365380167385885738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-28798361784147766342010-04-25T16:21:36.796-07:002010-04-25T16:21:36.796-07:00Hmmm, very intriguing, Maha.Hmmm, very intriguing, Maha.Catalysthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03804837416104556928noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-26905210110240948422010-04-25T18:15:27.927-07:002010-04-25T18:15:27.927-07:00Painful. Love takes so many wrong turns in lifemoo...Painful. Love takes so many wrong turns in life<br><br>moondustwritermoondustwriterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-73461201331092941302010-04-26T04:44:28.102-07:002010-04-26T04:44:28.102-07:00This enlightening piece was interesting to read an...This enlightening piece was interesting to read and just the right length.<br>Well done.<br>StarStarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06699491230987143490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-42238246092135437262010-04-26T07:06:12.198-07:002010-04-26T07:06:12.198-07:00This is really well done. Exceptional!This is really well done. Exceptional!Mama Zenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-77057416173608111642010-04-26T12:38:07.291-07:002010-04-26T12:38:07.291-07:00Interesting story. Well done.Interesting story. Well done.Tess Kincaidnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-61404233582204211022010-04-26T19:39:28.011-07:002010-04-26T19:39:28.011-07:00Sometimes unrequited love is the very best! :) A f...Sometimes unrequited love is the very best! :) A fascinating read.Tumblewords:http://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-26159111153942617962010-04-27T12:44:03.672-07:002010-04-27T12:44:03.672-07:00Sounds like real life-- real relationships. Fated ...Sounds like real life-- real relationships. Fated lovers.<br>Beautifully crafted.<br><br>Joannyjoannyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-6023799531060686062010-04-27T18:28:56.926-07:002010-04-27T18:28:56.926-07:00Oh we're a complicated lot, us humans, aren...Oh we're a complicated lot, us humans, aren't we? Well done.Jenniferhttp://profile.typepad.com/6p0120a6ad78ad970bnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5401425473113451944.post-12846216221356927452010-04-27T20:15:50.248-07:002010-04-27T20:15:50.248-07:00excellent in its eccentricity, the dialogue and ch...excellent in its eccentricity, the dialogue and characters--magnificent post!C.M. Jacksonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06936560662110633442noreply@blogger.com